A bit better than my other one...

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A bit better than my other one...
Topic Started: Nov 4 2009, 08:56 PM (158 Views)
Bacon Boy	Nov 4 2009, 08:56 PM Post #1
... Posts: 10,236 Group: Members11 Member #6,550 Joined: September 9, 2008 Note About Town and FC Heart Gold Friend Code: 4426-3776-3228 ~ Alfred	Looks better. Like Niko said, only one character. Better focal point. I have a cool line through the back. But I just realized, it's pink again... -_- Edited by Bacon Boy, Nov 4 2009, 08:57 PM.

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Thunderstruck	Nov 4 2009, 08:57 PM Post #2
Keep it together, chumps. Posts: 7,165 Group: Members11 Member #7,883 Joined: December 27, 2008	Gambit! =D better. Edited by Thunderstruck, Nov 4 2009, 08:58 PM.

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Bacon Boy	Nov 4 2009, 08:58 PM Post #3
... Posts: 10,236 Group: Members11 Member #6,550 Joined: September 9, 2008 Note About Town and FC Heart Gold Friend Code: 4426-3776-3228 ~ Alfred	Master Crash Nov 4 2009, 08:57 PM Gambit! =D better.

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Ricano	Nov 4 2009, 09:01 PM Post #4
I'd do it all again for you. Posts: 4,987 Group: Members11 Member #7,982 Joined: December 30, 2008	Looks ok, still a little too bright 8/10

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Pokeman	Nov 4 2009, 09:14 PM Post #5
I've been around. Posts: 1,340 Group: Members6 Member #6,943 Joined: November 15, 2008 ACCF Friend Code 3137-0098-5839 ACCF Name Joey ACCF Town Flordia Note About Town and FC Don't cut down the trees. and destroy flowers. and no running!!!!	i knew it looked familiar. good job, keep it up

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NikoKing	Nov 4 2009, 09:19 PM Post #6
trollface.jpg Posts: 6,162 Group: Members11 Member #6,691 Joined: November 12, 2008 Note About Town and FC HeartGold FC: 5328-3092-4509	You're right, this is way more better with just one focal point. The line's okay, it's unnecessary but still adds some detail into the signature. Once again, tone down the brightness. Here's a trick I use when lowering down the brightness: First off I use a gradient map with black and white. Second, set that gradient map layer to normal @ 25% - 40%. Use whatever works with you, and it should tone down the brightness a bit more. The focal and effects are a bit blurry, maybe a little sharpening might help? The light source at the top is huge, most light sources should be small. The lighting needs improvement, try using different kinds of lighting to see which one suits you best. Overall: A 7.8/10.

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Bacon Boy	Nov 4 2009, 09:20 PM Post #7
... Posts: 10,236 Group: Members11 Member #6,550 Joined: September 9, 2008 Note About Town and FC Heart Gold Friend Code: 4426-3776-3228 ~ Alfred	Nikoking Nov 4 2009, 09:19 PM You're right, this is way more better with just one focal point. The line's okay, it's unnecessary but still adds some detail into the signature. Once again, tone down the brightness. Here's a trick I use when lowering down the brightness: First off I use a gradient map with black and white. Second, set that gradient map layer to normal @ 25% - 40%. Use whatever works with you, and it should tone down the brightness a bit more. The focal and effects are a bit blurry, maybe a little sharpening might help? The light source at the top is huge, most light sources should be small. The lighting needs improvement, try using different kinds of lighting to see which one suits you best. Overall: A 7.8/10. That was what I kept forgetting! Sharpening!

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NikoKing	Nov 4 2009, 09:21 PM Post #8
trollface.jpg Posts: 6,162 Group: Members11 Member #6,691 Joined: November 12, 2008 Note About Town and FC HeartGold FC: 5328-3092-4509	Yeah, a sharpen can REALLY change the aspect of your signature, whether it's for the worst or the best.

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Bacon Boy	Nov 4 2009, 09:23 PM Post #9
... Posts: 10,236 Group: Members11 Member #6,550 Joined: September 9, 2008 Note About Town and FC Heart Gold Friend Code: 4426-3776-3228 ~ Alfred	Something I tossed together really quickly... I wanted to test that thing that people are doing about have their character "come out" of their sigs.

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Thunderstruck	Nov 4 2009, 09:24 PM Post #10
Keep it together, chumps. Posts: 7,165 Group: Members11 Member #7,883 Joined: December 27, 2008	Bacon Boy Nov 4 2009, 09:23 PM Something I tossed together really quickly... I wanted to test that thing that people are doing about have their character "come out" of their sigs. Looks better, although it could have more flow.

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